OK, here goes....I'll be to the point.
You've obviously learned something from somewhere or someone because one does not just set a pair of eyes like that on their 3rd deer .
Apoxie around the eyes is built well. Cant comment on eye placement as I cannot see the pupils..
pic115-1, The brisket is offset to the deer's right side, center it....
pic117-1, Face is indeed short...poor form selection. needs a longer nose. Lips are not tucked as the white hair should be under on the flat part of the lip form...
pic118-1, ear line wavey, should be neat and graceful. Ear buts under-built and not uniform.
pic119, lips not tucked well, again lines should be graceful. Nose hair, white, should be turned within the nostrils. My best prediction is that the nostrils were not fleshed properly and the hide is quite thick here. Thin the facial details better.
pic120, I like this eye from the side view, it is anatomically correct if it dries this way. I would suggest that those long guard hairs under the eye should lay down below the eye and out towards the camera shot...There are several out of place...
pic121-1, again the nose, white hairs within nostril, skin crooked, most likely needs thinning, hairline going on top of nose up form to between eyes is off center. Deer's right eye looks fine, left eye is in too far. Most likely caused byu thick hide around eyes, thin better.. "Double chin" appearance where the neck meets the jaws is evident of too small a face. Need to have a smooth transition here...
122-1, Earbuts improperly formed, unbalanced...glue or clay in hair of seam...antlers most definitely set too high...the skin will most likely pull away form the bases...
123-1, again that hair pattern on top of the nose up to the eyes is off centered.
Overall, looks a heck of a lot better than my third one ever did...
I'm curious though:
Did you use hide nails? The cardboard that you have pinned to the neck details while drying should be pinned to the form permanently....I put mine about every quarter inch....You shouldn't need that much pinning...
What type of hyde paste did you use?...How did you prep the form? How was the hide treated?
Get rid of the clothes pins on the ears and "taxi" that skin every day several times while drying to ensure thin fine lines....
Use your reference for facial details, earbuts etc...check kill photos for antler tilt..
Keep checkin in with Taxidermy.net, They're a good bunch of guys with a wealth of fine knowledge....hit the search feature there often, there's tons and tons......
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Hope I didn't prod too hard....
Luck