Hello everybody.

I am a commercial director and producer. Recently we made a commercial for a major retailer. We are trying very hard to speak to the avid outdoorsman in the language of avid outdoorsman. We hope to work extensively with outfitters and retailers of hunting, fishing, camping and all other outdoor endeavors. I would like to gather honest opinions as to what we are doing well and what we are doing wrong.

The link below is for the :60 version of our most recent commercial. i would appreciate any input anyone may have!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Ta2Z...el_video_title