RE: How's my form
Stand in that spot, and look straight at that fence with your shoulders parallel to it. then turn your head and draw your bow. At full draw, both your shoulders should be in line with the arrow, both your tits pointed at the fence. It looks to me like the draw length on your bow is too short, pulling your right shoulder forward, out of alignment. I cant see your feet, but they should also be straight. Looks like the whole right side of your body is pulling in to the string, when the string should pull to it.
My string sits at the back of my nose just barely brushing my upper cheek. How is your anchor point? your hand should be in a place where it is extremely comfortable and easy to return to that exact same spot every time you draw. I think if you get your proper draw length on that bow it should solve all these problems. Just my .02
If any of that is dead wrong, feel free to correct me.