I am no elder or a pro but I have been reading up alot on form and from what I see(and mentioned by others)is your release is to long, its very hard to squeeze the trigger when your finger is reaching and all you have contact with is the tip of your index. Also you are leaning your head into your string to see through your peep raise the peep and your head and I bet theat the string will be touching the tip of your nose. One other I noticed but but could be wrong but it looks like you have too much meat of your hand on the bow(grip).