shirt is too long and not tight enough. Fix those problems and re-post. Shorts might not hurt either.

Paul

Ya I think a bikini or thong would help us - I mean Her. Auxilery muscle usage and all

yep, she has my vote!!!
Dan

Mighty fine, she has my vote, hands down!

She has my vote.

She very weel could be.

ORIGINAL: atlasman

That was the next step, she relaxed her grip and started shootin better...

Chicken.

I agree, Atlas, she's gripping the bow too tight and I see you loosened that. Also, her release elbow is too high, the forearm should be parallel to the ground, picture the T form...get her elbow down, he hip back and loosen the grip.

Other than that, I'd like increased photos to see these corrections.

And it needs to be a lot colder outside if you're trying to emulate that first advertising foray!