RE: Do YOU think my draw length is too long?
Looks to me like your draw length is okay, but the string angle seems to show you're shooting a bow that's too short for your draw length. I've been there, done that. Had to have a nose like a collie to hit the string and the peep six inches away from my eye.
And I agree with Matt about finger placement on the release trigger.
On the other hand, the angle of the photo IS odd. It even looks like you're looking OVER the peep instead of thru it.