I think you guys are right. I need to work on my grammar for sure. Normaly my mom looks over it and it helps alot. I was in LD classes for english in school and I have alittle dyslexia. I choose not to go through all that crap when i went to college it tend to make them look at you different. I did not want that. Guess it might have helped. I know i should not have done gun control. In fact she said i made a good argument and had good facts and information. I think the citations might have hurt more then i first thought. Those are my real issue with things.