ORIGINAL: fingerz42

I think you guys may have gotten a bit out of hand. Constructive criticism is a good thing and can be very motivating, but to say that his story straight up sucked isn't constructive at all. Maybe he isn't the BEST writer, but his story was definitely enjoyable. Yes, it needs work. Yes, the grammar was off a bit. Yes, 7 + 7 =14 not eleven. But as a whole the story wasn't so bad.
It is one thing to give someone guidance to become better at what they choose, but dont squash someones hope. Telling him that his writing sucks can take away his desire or will to write. Why squash someones dreams? Be helpful with your criticisms, because whether you think so or not, it may hurt more than you realize.

I think he posted this story with the intent to share his passion for the outdoors that we all can agree we have. The story relates to each and everyone of us, and therefor lets not down our fellow hunter but embrace that he is writing about hunting at all. With some work, and some help, he can become a great writer.

Personally, I think your story is pretty good. There are some things that need work, but all-in-all you write very well. Keep at it, and follow your heart. Don't let others dictate what you can and cannot do.