Okay then, for everyone that is reading this, when I am writing back in response or if I am just typing for this site, I am really not concerned with how i spell or even say thing's.
I am not trying to be "perfect" when I reply, that is why I dont usually use full words or capital leeters, it's called internet talk, abbreviations of words and/or sentences to make them shorter. I am sorry if that is too complicated for some.
Also, I do take the critique's to heart and listen, I take the tips and tricks from the people who I believe are actually helping me. As for some other's, I fray away from them.
I have no problem with having my work looked at or talked about, regardless if it is good or bad, I appreciate all the comments. And yes, I understand that things do need to be worked on and gone over a few times, in order to make it right. I am just saying that guy's that leave mean responses, not knowing that I know when I mispell words or ifstatements are out ofsync,I am just responding in as short of form as possible, and as quick as possible. I f I went through all of the post's, I bet I would find millions of mistakes, but thats the thing, nobody here is trying tobe "perfect" in the way they write, I mean just in the responses here aloneI have found alot of things that are wrong.
The story was a rough draft and has been changed a few times, this specific story is on a web-site and has been revised, I just posted it here because of it being a "hunting" site. I am sorry for the way everyone seems to think of things and for some odd reason, majority of the "rude" remarks, seem to be coming form one team???


I am sorry that because my generation of people, have found new ways to communicatebetween each other, using the internet talk, short-form words and lingo, but dont hold that agaisnt me, I just use them-

Also, if my grammar is so bad then how come MSW doesn't pick it up or any other editing system in which I have used....so unless your anEnglish major or have an actual career in writing then,please stick towhat youknow...Im not looking to get people "on my case" about my writing....also I have a webpage that has a couple of my writings andI have had no comments like the ones left here... its sort of strange......because Ihost anEnglish literary site that compliments every style of writing, if you knew, there area lotof different styles of writing...I don't see the "big grammar" mistakes...

All fixed, the right way........I am sorry for trying to write in short form and not being so technical with everything that I say. I will from now on, to stop in the confusion.
Thank You for all your replies.........