ORIGINAL: bowtechlove
well im confused....
to be honest....im more of a down home writer...i want people to read what i write, that can go with the story, not need a dictionary or something to read it!!!!
plus, adding fiction to a story is not something that is bad, alot of outdoor stories i have read are not the full truth, they embelish too....
also, if my grammer is sooo bad then how come MSW doesnt pick it up or any other editing system in which i have used....so unless your an english major or have an actual career in writing then, plz stick to waht u know...im not looking to get people "on my case" about my writing....also i have a webpage that has a couple of my writings and i have had no comments like the ones left here...and its sort of strange......cuz i host an english literary site that compliments every style of writing, and if you knew, there are alot of different styles of writng...and i dont see the "big grammer" mistakes...point them out
Bro, since I do have a degree in writing, and I'm the head writer/editor for an outdoor company I think I qualify to critique.
The first thing you need to learn is to take some constructive criticism if you hope to be a writer. I don't care where you are writing or who you write for, if you work in this professionthere will be someone there to tear apart your work and hand it back to you so you can do it all over again. That is the way it works. If you can't take it then you might as well look at another field.
You asked for help and myself and others are trying to give it. Let go of your pride for a second and accept the criticism. It will only make you a better writer.