seemed to be well thought out and flowed pretty well, but just one question.in the middle of the storyyou said this:
Six points on the left, with one drop tine, and another seven points on the other side
yet at the end of the story, you say this:
Just as I counted before, a damn good 11 pointer
now i'm no mathematician, but isn't six plus seven 13 points?
seriously though not being a smart ass just wondered if you picked up on that or did i miss something in the story?