Ok, I've been working on my shooting every other day to build my shoulder back up and now its time to ask for help/honest opinions of experienced archers.

1. How is the form? When I started shooting, the only guidance I got was make sure I put the quick release against my jawline in the same place every time.What do I need to do to improve it (Photo 1)?
2. For 30 yard shots, is this deer dead in a timely manner (Photo 2)?