RE: Critique me again(updated with new pictures...)
Without being able to see the feet,it is hard to tell for sure but is looks like your head and feet are aligned properly but your hips are pushed too far forward.They should be centered under your shoulders.
I personally wear my wrist release like you BUT I have it shortened MUCH shorter so I can wrap my finger over it. Take a look at my avatar,that is how I have it in it.