RE: Critique me again(updated with new pictures...)
Try strapping that release a little bit tighter to your wrist. Not tight like a wristwatch, but a bit tighter to get the release head under your finger closer. You see that big gap between your index finger and the trigger? That's why your right arm isn't level to your arrow. Shortening up your string loop a bit will take up any remaining slack to get your arm level. And are you sure that isn't a leotard? If it snapsunder your crotch I'm outta here!