Rockinchair:

That's a good read. The thing I was worried about (pre-conceived notion that DID NOT pan out to be true) was HOW it was written (was it easy to read?). It is.

The only advice I'd give is......"maybe" ask the web administrator to format the article so that it's not so linear....and the reader doesn't have to scroll, so much. Other than that....for an 18 yr old writer.....I'd say you had a future in this sort of thing.

I'll give you an "A".....and admit I'm looking forward to the next submission.