ORIGINAL: Greg / MO
The release hand looks weird to me like you are cocking the wrist up,if that is the case,try to straighten it out a little.
That's the biggie you need to work on now... First thing that immediately jumped out at me too. If you're really wanting to get all this right, as it appears you do, I'd ditch that release for something with one of today's "shorty" heads on it that allows you to get your release hand really close to that loop -- with your release wrist laying flat in a straight line with your forearm. I'm going from memory here, but I think Tru-fire makes one called a Bulldog or something like that. Matt / PA (who your picture is of) and I both shoot Scott's Wildcat.
I went back and looked at your photo one more time after replying... Once you get a decent release, I'd work on getting a solid anchor point you feel comfortable with somewhere on your jaw bone that's easily repeatable. In your pic, it looks like your hand is somewhere up around the top of your ear...
If I get that Tru-fire Bulldog release, do you think that will help shorten my draw length a little?It looks very simalar to the release I have now.