RE: How's my form/draw length? (Revised)
Well,I believe the pic is deceiving because you are dropping the bow arm to aim down at a target.This is not correct,you should be drawing straight out and then bend at the waist to get down to the target.I believe that would help the appearance of the form.
The release hand looks weird to me like you are cocking the wrist up,if that is the case,try to straighten it out a little.