I have never mounted a deer before so I dont know too much about the detail work, but the very first thing I noticed were the low ears and high scull plate in the first picture. Since im assuming thatthere will be a lotof people who will be looking at this mount that have also never mounted a deer, that would be the first thing I would try to improve on.

I must say though, he did a whole lot better than I would have done on my first!