ORIGINAL: Oneshot7
good story but sounds kinda like a poem either way it is good
The reason it may sound something like a poem is because it was a
thought piece more than a feature article.
If any of you read
Bowhunter Magazine on a regular basis, you'll notice that M.R. James writes thecolumn in the back of the magazine, Short Shots. His style of writing for hiscolumn is a lot like how I wrote this piece.
Why I wrote it this way is beyond me, honestly. The words flow from the pen however they want, most days. The majority of the pieces I've written came out like this, I don't know why. Possibly because when I write about the outdoors I try to paint a picture for the reader, so that hopefully you'll feel like you're in the stand with me.
In any case, thank you for the kind words, Oneshot.