wow, i read that totally the wrong way!!
dont forget those possesive apostraphes (also, i dont know how to spell apostraphes, at all. [X(])

we butcher our own deer. We used to take them to a shop near us, but we just cant afford it anymore. why pay for somehting that we can do ourselves. I think that shop doesnt do it anymore. Probably jsut butcher for themselves and friends now.