Icedragon

By the way while we are on the subject here are some pictures of me at full draw, any suggestions or comments about my form? Also on the last picture I have here, I noticed yesterday it was rattling, I never noticed it until yesterday so im not sure if it is supposed to rattle. It is the golden looking thing that looks like it adjusts your draw length, rattle or not? Sorry about the quality of the last pic btw.

Thanks in Advance guys!