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#11

I think the bow is about 1/2"-3/4" too long,
Draw a straight line up from your nock that line should intersect with the corner of your eye, as it is now it is about 1/2 to 3/4" past your eye.
Big improvement in the grip tho but I would still try and get the knuckles out a tad more so the center of the bow is resting on the meaty part of your thumb.
