Piebald drawing
#26
RE: Piebald drawing
Nina - very nice job - I'm impressed.
You asked for a critique and I noticed no one offered one.
The deer is very well done. You can tell you spent most of your time on that aspect of your drawing - and yes I like it too.
I also like the attention to detail on the ground.
The leaves on the trees however are two dimensional, and while everything else in the drawing looks like realism - these leaves donot. I'm sure you know that sometimes in folk art - idealistic representations of nature are perfectly acceptable - however, when combined with the very detailed depiction of your subject, I'm not sure it works.
I've seen your posts before - butI've not seen your other drawings - Keep up the great work.
FH
You asked for a critique and I noticed no one offered one.
The deer is very well done. You can tell you spent most of your time on that aspect of your drawing - and yes I like it too.
I also like the attention to detail on the ground.
The leaves on the trees however are two dimensional, and while everything else in the drawing looks like realism - these leaves donot. I'm sure you know that sometimes in folk art - idealistic representations of nature are perfectly acceptable - however, when combined with the very detailed depiction of your subject, I'm not sure it works.
I've seen your posts before - butI've not seen your other drawings - Keep up the great work.
FH
#27
RE: Piebald drawing
Looks very good! My only suggestion has already been mentioned and that was to add leaves at differnet angles. Generally you won't be able to see the veins on every leaf. I still agree, it looks awesome!