RE: critique time(pics)
Ok, you asked for it.
1) the nose looks abit more like a cows. For one it appears the nostrel openings are not even. The right side appears more open than the left side. The cow look comes from the top end of the nose sticking out flat. The middle of the nose needs more clay, then round it down to the nostril openings. Its too flat all the way across, it needs to be more rounded. Hope you under stand what I mean. Check out some nose pics, maybe that'll help.
2) Ear's. Its hard to tell by the size of your picture. But what did you use in the ears, liners w/ear butt ends or no butts. Or the bondo method? It appears like it needs more ear butt at the head. Ears not sticking out far enough away from the head. If no butts were used, clay will fix that.
3) Eyes are too rounded. The top back half edge of the eye lid should come down a bit over the glass eye. More like a tear drop shape on top, and rounded on bottom I guess is best way to explain it.
Also use more pins if haven't alreadly. You want everything in place to stay perfect during the drying process. I saw very little pins. Use them in the nose nostrils, more along the tucked lips, and around the eyes at hairline. Also be sure to cart the edges of your ears also.
Other than that if this is your first, or one of your first I'd say you did a darn good job. It looks way better than the first 5 or 6 I did!!
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